Good to see the reading happening. I keep onreinforcing that the first paragraph needs to focus from the time of Hitler as C in C, anything else will burn words. I expect to see all of the campaigns where Hitler was involved in C in C covered by way of examples. Clearly, from your reading, you should be seeing phases of his level of involvement as C in C, and importantly how the 'professional' commanders reacted to him and his decisions. How does this change as the direction and success of the war changes? When does the 'magic' wear off? Did he make the right decisons at Stalingrad? These are better areas to look at than a narrative paragraph. Leave the narrative alone!
Good to see the reading happening. I keep onreinforcing that the first paragraph needs to focus from the time of Hitler as C in C, anything else will burn words. I expect to see all of the campaigns where Hitler was involved in C in C covered by way of examples. Clearly, from your reading, you should be seeing phases of his level of involvement as C in C, and importantly how the 'professional' commanders reacted to him and his decisions. How does this change as the direction and success of the war changes? When does the 'magic' wear off? Did he make the right decisons at Stalingrad? These are better areas to look at than a narrative paragraph. Leave the narrative alone!
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